life is too bored
people have no time
for their love,friends
not even for their families
are they become tight -fisted
or self centered
they can hate
but not
love others...?
"No Its Not"
suddenly I got
reply....
I left surprised
who is he ...?
My soul replied
It's me dear
do not bother about anyone
the creater and destroyer
are within us
love yourself and
be good to the needy
and life become
beautiful for you
I feel
as if
I heard voice of god
aah .....
it's the gift
I never had before
Poet: Sujata Dua
Copyright © 2009 Sujata Dua
read: 3440 times Rating:**** Date: 10 February, 2009
This poetry has won the poetry craze compitition of march 2009
16 comments:
By Lala 03 Mar, 2009
Hi mam congratulateeeee :)
By Andori 03 Mar, 2009
Woww fantastic poem. Good luck to you.
By Sam 03 Mar, 2009
Congratulation Dua for winning contest. I was really expecting that you will be winner because of your poem's theme and your poems's rating!
Sam
By Janak Sapkota 03 Mar, 2009
Lovely to hear that you win!! Congrats... Keep writing..
Good Luck
By Sujata 04 Mar, 2009
Hi friends,
thanks a lot for your appreciation
Regards,
Sujata
By daisy 04 Mar, 2009
hey congrats dear .....its a nice poetry ...god bless
By Memo 05 Mar, 2009
Hi Dua, i am also from Delhi, congratulation to you. Your poem is really great :)
By Iqbal 09 Mar, 2009
Hi, Congratulations on winning contest. Have a nice time ever.
Sincerely,
Iqbal
writer_iqbal@yahoo.com
iqbal_mangrio@hotmail.com
By Sujata Dua 18 Mar, 2009
Dear daisy,memo ,iqbal...
thanks a lot frns...
By marj 20 Mar, 2009
nice!
By Sujata 25 Mar, 2009
thanks mari...I am honoured
By ANIRBAN MUKHOPADHYAY 01 Apr, 2009
hi maam,
i am really inspired by your poem and especially because you are an indian.i am from kolkata but now i live in bhubaneswar.i am 17 years old and am in class 12.it feels really good to have such king of sites as it helps amateur poets like me to develop our skills and rank ourself.
By the way have you got 1000$ for winning .
By Chris wallach 01 Apr, 2009
good poem
By Sujata Dua 03 Apr, 2009
Dear Chris and Anirban,
Thanks for the appreciation ....love that I got from all of you is much more precious than money.....
Regards,
Sujata
By ANIRBAN MUKHOPADHYAY 04 Apr, 2009
Hi Maam,
Thank you very much for your kind reply as it has encouraged me a lot. I want your honest comments about my poem indicating my errors, weakness and to what extent did my poem justified itself by winning this contest.
Another thing.I don't worry about money but atleast winners should get some memento type things like certificate by post, trophy or small amount of cash like 100-250$(thats not much).Such prizes will indeed encourage poets of our age group as we write poems with hope of encouragement from the organisers.But one thing i have to accept that Mr.Burhan Khan has really done a good job in bringing together all the poets.Whenever I am telling my teachers and relatives that i have won a poetry contest they ask me what prize will i get, then i feel ashamed as i have to say that i will not get any and many of my friends think that i am faking.That really hurts me and discourages me.
But your comment has really encouraged me again.Did you get any certificate by e-mail.
Thank You,
Anirban Mukhopadhyay.
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